Wednesday, 9 November 2011

Rough Timeline of story.

Key:
RL = Live action.
SA = Animation. Beginning of timeline.
EA = Animation. End of timeline.
Rough Timeline
Intro
RL. Girl is sat in living room drawing. Shows picture she drew of her and boy looking happy as the animation characters. Piano starts.

0:00 – 0:1212 seconds -
RL. Boy comes in and tries to kiss her on the cheek but she dodges. He then tries to sit next to her so she gets up and leaves.
EA. Introduces the animation woman but she’s half ice sculpture. On her own.

0:12 – 0:2513 seconds
RL. Follows girl into bedroom and shows older drawing.
SA. Shows couple being happy.

0:25 – 0:3813 seconds
RL. Boy knocks on the door. The girl ignores him.

0:38 – 0:44 6 secondsCUT OUT.

0:44 – 0:51 – 7 seconds
SA. Boy meets other woman (who’s a witch/villain). Falls in love.

0:51 – 1:0312 seconds
RL. Boy continues knocking on the door.

1:03 – 1:1714 seconds
SA. The girl sees the boy and the witch together.

1:17 – 1:28 11 seconds
RL. The boy’s phone goes off in the room. The girl checks it and looks furious.

1:28 – 1:5224 secondsCUT OUT.

1:52 – 2:19 27 seconds
SA. Girl fights with the boy in the same room as EA. Witch watches.
RL. Girl opens the door and yells at boy.

2:19 – 2:3213 secondsCUT OUT.

2:32 – 2:46 – 14 seconds
SA. The witch steps forward and starts fighting with the girl.
RL. Boy leaves. The girl goes back to the bed and cries.

2:46 – 3:00 20 seconds – Parallel editing.
SA. Witch pushes the girl into the chair as the boy watches horrified. She freezes he girl into the half ice sculpture in EA.
RL. The girl cries on the bed as the boy walks away angrily.

3:00 – 3:1111 seconds -
EA. Girl frozen. Boy runs out of building. Witch walks away coldly.
RL. Boy walks away coldly. Girl gets up and starts rummaging through the drawings.

3:11 – 3:4332 seconds
EA. Fades to black as RL woman rips them up.

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